My newest song "Time For Me To Leave"

[A55VA6]

I've been working on this song on and off for about 2 years and I finally got it how I wanted it. I wrote it about a situation in my life a couple years ago. It would mean a lot if you could take a listen and let me know what you think! And for those who've heard my other song "Time Bomb", which song do you like more? I provided the lyrics below, just in case you'd like to follow along! Thanks!

You got what you wanted, but I want more.​

I wanna breathe what you ignore.​

I got it in my mind, I got it in my brain.​

I wanna feel so different, not the same.​

I wish that you would understand.​

This wasn't love, it was your little game.​

Every time you blamed me, you got your way.​

You told your lies, stupid alibis.​

Everyone praised you like you were right.​

I wish that they would understand.​

Is this all that we've got?​

I gave you all that you need.​

I guess it's not what I thought​

It's time for me to leave.​

Is this all that we've got?​

I gave you all that you need.​

I guess it's not what I thought​

It's time for me to leave.​

I know you don't want me to try.​

You want me to walk away this time.​

Am I here to stay, or will I walk away?​

No one knows what it's like to feel this pain.​

I wish that they would understand.​

Is this all that we've got?​

I gave you all that you need.​

I guess it's not what I thought​

It's time for me to leave.

Is this all that we've got?​

I gave you all that you need.​

I guess it's not what I thought​

It's time for me to leave.​

It's time for me to leave.​

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[Prime Time]

Love the chorus. If I was producing it I would not have faded it out but finished with the chorus and then come to an abrupt stop. But then I'm kind of weird. I'll have to listen to 'Time Bomb' again to know which one I like better. You're very talented and creative. Keep up the good work.

 

[Mister Sin]

I dig it.

 

[RamFan503]

Pretty cool man.

 

[A55VA6]

Love the chorus. If I was producing it I would not have faded it out but finished with the chorus and then come to an abrupt stop. But then I'm kind of weird. I'll have to listen to 'Time Bomb' again to know which one I like better. You're very talented and creative. Keep up the good work.

Thanks!

I definitely hear what you're saying. I might even go back and see what that will sound like because until my album is finished, I'll be making small changes to songs if I see fit, so really no song is 100% final.

 

[RamFan503]

Pretty cool man.

 

[Mister Sin]

My only critique would be the drum. I feel like it gets off now and then. I could be wrong. But I love the song. Time Bomb is still tops for me, but if it was an album, this is one I would def enjoy. Great job bud. Keep em comin.

 

[CGI_Ram]

Nice. Reminds me of Blink182. Hope that's okay comparison.

 

[A55VA6]

Nice. Remnds me a little of Blink-182. Hope that's okay comparison.

That's actually my favorite band of all-time. They're the reason I started playing music! Thanks!

 

[CGI_Ram]

That's actually my favorite band of all-time. They're the reason I started playing music! Thanks!

Whoa...

 

[A55VA6]

My only critique would be the drum. I feel like it gets off now and then. I could be wrong. But I love the song. Time Bomb is still tops for me, but if it was an album, this is one I would def enjoy. Great job bud. Keep em comin.

Thanks man! I checked the mix and the drums at the beginning actually were off for some reason, but the rest of the song is how it should be. I fixed up the drums and a couple other small tweaks and re-uploaded the song!

 

[Mister Sin]

Awesome, yea I heard it towards the beginning.